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mr.wonton
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:48 am     Reply with quote
Hi everyone,
Just getting back int he swing of things and I did this concept painting for a story that I'm doing.Please give me any feedback! Please be brutal! Thanks!!!! http://www.sirius.com/~eshiu/alien_int.jpg
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:56 am     Reply with quote
Hey pretty nice, for some reason the Matrix popped up in my head when I saw this, I dunno I think I need to go see my shrink.

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mr.wonton
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 3:01 am     Reply with quote
not weird at all! The painting is supposed to be underwater(murky water) although most people cant really tell....any advice to make it mor like water?
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waylon
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 5:50 am     Reply with quote
Hi. I like it. It has a really neat atmosphere to it, good composition, etc etc. The reason it probably doesn't look like water is because you're lacking all the little visual cues people look for - little bubbles, a blue tint to the whole scene, things floating in the water, etc. I bet if you shifted the hue to an indigo blue, it would look a lot more like water, though that would ruin the eerie mood you've got going. So if you're really desperate to get across the idea that it's water, I'd add some aliens or something floating about, but I think it stands on its own really well as-is.
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Rinaldo
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 9:14 am     Reply with quote
very nice
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LeChuck
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 9:23 am     Reply with quote
I dont know what it is... But I like
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mattready
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 10:02 am     Reply with quote
very nice....but i do agree to add bubbles and tweek the color to a more blue-ish. it did a QUICK hue shift to show you what i mean....



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elam
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:23 pm     Reply with quote
cool


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mr.wonton
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 12:17 am     Reply with quote
sorry matt that pic didn't make it....can u resend?? Thanks for all the input!


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