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Bradford
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 1:19 pm     Reply with quote
By the look of your website, you are really into making graphics that have a radial design to them.

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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 1:59 pm     Reply with quote
Too symettrical for me. The thing in the center kind of comes out of nowhere... I'm assuming it's some kinda curved glass dome or soemthign so add a bit more shadow and highlights to defined the space. But, I really like the glass and the spokes showing underneath. Really cool.
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tr0n
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:50 pm     Reply with quote
To me, it looks pretty filter-raped and unoriginal, but keep trying.

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Striker
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 2:54 pm     Reply with quote
Is it a compass??
It's technically well done and clean.. but somewhat lacking in composition. Show us more...
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arniemg
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 6:57 pm     Reply with quote
i think that if you told us your intentions with this pic, then it would be easier to critique it.
I don't know what to think of it, because i don't know if its supposed to be a painting, a button for a webpage, or just somehting cool to look at...
...be more descriptive.
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Tenarrus
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 7:45 pm     Reply with quote
Thx for the thoughts. It's just something cool to look at. Doing all the work in Photoshop 5.5 alone and from scratch using no other graphics for overlays and such. With the sticks you might get the idea it is a compass as before with only 6 sticks it looked like you were going to sea with the wheel of a boat. Just was playing around and still working on the pic. It's gone through a lot since the last posting and I will be getting a updated pic in a day or so.
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Lumina
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 8:36 pm     Reply with quote
Hey u! I must say i really did enjoy your pic i love the colours.. its very warm, and very symbolic

but i must say that im very dissapointet over the fact that very many here really don't know how to give any compliments on a created work.. after all, everything has its own charm and style.. keep it up
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Tenarrus
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2000 11:36 pm     Reply with quote
Here is a update to my last pic:



For 1024x768 image you can view it at http://www.tenarrus.com/new/web4.jpg

Welcome any comments as always!
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Tenarrus
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 12:46 am     Reply with quote
I was forwarded to this forum by a good friend due to the passion I have for graphics and the professionalism of the site. I'm honored to be among the many talented individuals here.

Well here is the goods. Ready to be butchered and served for lunch.



There is a bigger 1024x768 pic at http://www.tenarrus.com/new/web1.jpg

Let me know what you think...

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Light
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 12:56 am     Reply with quote
This is another one that is hard to crit.

The composition seems a little boring. The one object in the center of the screen seems to just sit there.

This is very abstract but doesnt seem visually interesting enough.
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Spitfire
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 1:36 am     Reply with quote
Sorry, i find it incredibly boring. It only shows knowledge of Photoshop, not of design in general.



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