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Tweeder
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 10:15 pm     Reply with quote
This is my newest sketch .. my scanner is a pos so it came out bad, and I can't edit it because *somebody* has my wacom .. no names A lot of the shading and details don't want to show up no matter what I do, I need a new scanner but I'm brilliant and quit my job before I found a new one so that's kind of hard right now.



I think I may try coloring this with markers or pencils .. I got this nice set for xmas that I haven't used yet. Lemme know what you think please.

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galen
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 9:54 am     Reply with quote
hmm
well, there's a lot, probably too much, negative space. i dont know if you drew anything there or not, since you said your scanner is wacky, but seems like something would show up if you had...
also, you have conflicting perspectives. the guy, the chair, and the wall behind him all work together well, but the table is straight on, no depth at all, then the phone is going on ANOTHER perspective...

i don't exactly know how to fix it, but you might want to add some depth to your table and redraw the phone..use the chair as a reference. since its square and sitting level with the floor, the table should follow the same rules



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My tea's gone cold,I'm wondering why I got out of bed at all
the morning rain clouds up my window and I can't see at all
And even if I could it'd all be grey, but your picture on my wall
it reminds me that it's not so bad
it's not so bad
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