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Author   Topic : "bather/landscape rough sketch--crit please"
Irulann
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 8:33 am     Reply with quote


Just a new sketch for a future painting-I think it looks ok'ish right now, but it needs a HUGE amount of work before it's even a workable sketch--just kinda felt like posting to see what everyone thought--thanks in advance for crits

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[This message has been edited by Irulann (edited January 12, 2001).]
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Al_kgs
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 9:01 am     Reply with quote
It's a bit strange the way the path is going away and up... Maybe it shouldn't go that far up in the picture, it seems as if it was seen from above whereas the woman is not. u see what i mean?

And for a bathing related picture, maybe you could focus more on the water than the vegetation surrounding with cool effects of reflexion and stuffs...

Anyway the starting material is interesting
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 3:55 pm     Reply with quote
dont spoil it by showing us the bas sketch
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Irulann
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 4:16 pm     Reply with quote
sorry guys

back to the 'ol drawing board-just as an updae, it's coming along much better now...thanks
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