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::nox|silicon::
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 5:00 pm     Reply with quote
Hi All!

Wow - my first image-post here

jus' wanted to show you some rough sketches, inspired by a dream I had about an oriental basar.
Let me know what you think! (I could have done a better job scanning it tho )


This one's my fav - I like the look on his face


The wise/trickery guy...


she's more of a bit desperate and besides differs in style a bit - note the hobbit-look of her baby (looking off the fact that it's just quick & dirty)

looking forward to hear from u...

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[This message has been edited by ::nox|silicon:: (edited January 14, 2001).]

hope the pix work now

[This message has been edited by ::nox|silicon:: (edited January 14, 2001).]
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 9:20 pm     Reply with quote
Nice work, man. Look forward to seeing more stuff from you!
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 10:13 pm     Reply with quote
eh, i know this pictures.
you should mention that u used an anatomical book as reference. i think the name of the book is Anatomische Zeichenschule, right?
other than that the pictures are ok.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 4:40 am     Reply with quote
Kewl Sketches! I like the way you can capture people. Try to use a wider ranges of tones/shades, make the darker sections darker and have really light sections. This will help to bring your image to life. I know the guy might be wise and have a few extra brain cells but probably not that many. Look at how far back the head goes, what is wrong with it? It goes back too far.

Keep up the good work

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 1:43 pm     Reply with quote
cuddly: thanx! I bet you'll see more - I really love this place

matt: thanks for the crit! You're right - his head doesn't look... uhm... quite in shape I'm also still learning to do more "accenting" - they look too flat, don'T they?

masticator: dunno the book...?

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 2:28 pm     Reply with quote
the first two pics are really impressive work =)
and well, the third looks a little bit strange imho, maybe it's the shading of her face and her eyes

nevertheless, great pics...



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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 3:41 pm     Reply with quote
heh... nice to meet someone from austria here

glad you like the pix. as I noted above the third differs in style and I kind'a abstracted the eyes etc. - 'm not sure if I should -like- that tho
The scan of pic 3 suxx too (actually primax-scanners suck big time), but I know I should improve contrast/shading of my pictures anyway.

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