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Author   Topic : "Fire Goddess Type Thing...Suggestions/Comments please"
Rossimo
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 5:53 pm     Reply with quote
Started this yesterday...worked a little on it today. I'll probably finish it sometime later this week. Tell me what you like/dislike about it, and give me any suggestions you may have. Thankyaz.
Sorry about the large image size.




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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 6:01 pm     Reply with quote
well she's missing a little bit of important anatomy on her breasts. But I think the main issue would be the face. You look a little like u couldn't decide between 3/4 view and front so u just did a little of both. The features are places in the position of a front view and many of them are drawn that way, but the nose ear and the shape of the head seem to be at an angle.
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::nox|silicon::
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 6:07 pm     Reply with quote
nice idea...
the fire doesn't convince yet tho and the face's proportions/positions are quite wrong. the nose is too long and the chin is a bit too short. the perspective (left cheek) doesn't match well and the right eye is in a position like if her head would be straight rather than bent. also try working out more detail on the side of the head.
the fire looks ok on the roots of the hair (above her forehead), the rest doesn't look good to me yet. also the form of the hair/fire looks more like iof she was lying on a surface...
the body looks good, looking off the left elbow.

hope this helps Looking forward to see this pic's progress...

p.s.: the face's aspect looks a bit picasso-ish

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 6:56 pm     Reply with quote
Yay finally some help
Yeh thanks all for pointing out my proportion mistakes and whatnot, not I can have fun fixing it all!
And yeah, the fire sucks at the moment, didn't spend much time on it.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2001 7:18 pm     Reply with quote
Whipped these proportions up...are they still wrong, or are they better?


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 4:58 am     Reply with quote
better than before.
the neck could be a bit more straight down or even slightly curved to the (our) right(her left).

keep on working on that one, looking forward to your progress

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 6:48 am     Reply with quote
looks better...
the left eye still doesn't line up (rotate it's outer corner down as bit), the right eyebrow is wrong (too far outside, wrong angle) and the nose is a bit too far right. however - the proportions already look way better than before

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