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Andromeda
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 Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 3:46 am |
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One day in singapore A group of comic artists
got together and decided to publish a comic book ...
The submission date is THIS SUNDAY
(7th October 2001)
and i've just colored this much and just finished the 2nd page.
:\ ... damn ... damn this slacking.
[ October 04, 2001: Message edited by: Andromeda[*] ] |
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a_sh
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 12:57 pm |
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LOL!
what is that fish doing on the fence in frame 1?  |
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 5:02 pm |
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Well its been awhile since I've seen someone so close to my own member number (only 8 different). Anyho, the artwork is nice and visually interesting although I'm sure your more interested in the colouring aspect. I like the style that you have going here and it is nice to see something other than a "liquid!" style of colouring (I'm not knocking that style as I like it, always nice to see something original and fresh). I think the focus and everything that you have going on in the first panel is great. The rain addes a nice atmosphere.
The next to panels just seem a bit unfinished for mine as they just seem a little flat and lacking a really polished depth feeling. In the 2nd panel, I would try to have some highlights a bit lighter and some dark shadows. At the moment it just seems a little dull with dark greens, reds, browns and greys.
In the third panel, I would place in some shadows and play around with a lighting effect.
Here are some really quick touch ups to try to illustrate the point a little:
Again they are crude but hopefully you can understand what I'm getting at. |
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Andromeda
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 2:51 am |
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Thank you much ...
thank you very much ...
one question tho .. howd you make the pic appear ? ...
i havent posted in so long, i forgot what i did wrong or right .. |
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 3:41 am |
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| when posting a reply, click the image icon under the "instant ubb code", enter the web address in the prompt window and that is about it. |
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bellie
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 4:13 am |
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| good stuff.. my only crit would be that the first panel seems a bit fuzzy.. and doesnt seem to match with the other two? this caught my attention. |
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