[Dan]

Just something I did with the mouse

[Bishop_Six]

I don't have much to say about the picture(why the seemingly random strokes of varying color on his jacket and pants?), but that is one dang funny sig you have there! hehehe... a pack of rabid wild dogs... hehehe

[Matt Elder]

Youve made a good start with the colouring but try to work and refine it a bit. At the moment, it does seem that the colours are a bit random and don't follow any obvious lighting/tone ideas. Take the area near his left arm for existance. There might be a shadow near the arm / under the armpit but you have a line between this and the jacket opening. It becomes difficult to get a sense of where the light is coming from. Keep at it and it should be cool.

[Dan]

no no, those lines are just cause I started it in mspaint when I was bored and I drew the framework in light grey, then when I moved it to adobe, I was too lazy to go through and take out the frame that was part of the body now and so I just coloured over it