[thor64]

I started drawing a face (how original!)... Then I decided to turn him into wolverine... He is suppose to look a bit like a beast - a little angry maybe... But i can't seem to get his teeth right - could someone please try drawing them or point out how they should be.

Also other C&C please!




[ October 04, 2002: Message edited by: thor64 ]

[gigatron]

You should have a dif mouth all together even if u make descent teeth the mouth aint scaring me :P You got an interesting idea of the motion or something heh but the mouth must be 'responsive' to the changes in the face as well. try doing it in front of the mirror try to immitate the thing that wolverine does it cant be just a flat looking mouth i dunno maybe im just seeing things hahaha

[thor64]

Your right - it's more 'I'm-trying-to-be-a funny-elvis-wolverine'... i'll try to work on the mouth.... 1st I gotta get me a small mirror, so that I won't have to go to the bathroom all the time :P

[thor64]

WORK iN PROGRESS...

I've done a little more now... the mouth is still not right, but it's way better than the 1st one IMO. The problem is i don't have a mirror :P

[thor64]

So what do u think? (forgot I had a point with posting :P)

[Qwert]

It looks good. IMO, I think you should try it with his teeth clenched together (Like he's growling). It might give it a little more of an intimidating feel to it. That's the way I picture wolverine when he's mad. lol.
But it looks good!

[Rat]

He looks like he's got way too many teeth, especially on the bottom row. And none of them look quite right except the front two on the bottom and top. The canines shouldn't be that square, for one thing. Eep! This is the sort of thing I can't explain in simple words! Look at your teeth in a mirror like that.

[thor64]

Rat u r right about some points... but then again, I haven't finalized the teeth since i wasn't sure on his expression (on this pic you can probably see that the teeth in the upper and lower part of the mouth are two seperate layers)...
I have tryied letting him 'bite' (thanx Qwert) instead...looks better again IMO.

And Rat about teeth...you have more teeth in the lower part of your mouth! I count four out from the middle in the upper part - looking down form there - I have 5 in the lower part.

[bouncemonster]

pointy teeth necessary

[thor64]

A small update...

I have tried to redo his hair. I liked those ears but now they are covered in hair :P
Note: those lines on his forehead aren't done, i might take em away again....
So far - but maybe not so good?

[tilokani]

Cool, but his head kinda stops shorter than it should.

[gigatron]

WOW ITS BEEN SO LONG SINCE YOU LASTED UPDATED! Great fix lol, i remember the bad mouth hehehehe its hularious, much better now keep it up. Leme mention a few things, the head's shape is a bit weird but im tired so i could be just rambling on and on (got a migrane). The major issue to me right at front is the spacing between mouth and nose and the shape of the nose. The nose has to be more compressed when such an expression is made if im not mistaken, instead yours is very smooth lined. It has to be layered in a sense near top. Or maybe not, the spacing is the weirdest id say. Hope im helpful im tired, no way im drawing over image :P Someone i hope u understand me lol...

[ October 04, 2002: Message edited by: gigatron ]

[B0b]

sorry but as a huge wolverine fan, you've made him look like a horse... *neigh*

[thor64]

hmm. yeah... i haven't really worked on the teeth - they have to be more pointy. I'll just use pinch filter on the teeth layer and it should be fixed *JOKING* :P

About the shape of the head - i guees i need more 'tophair', or what?

I haven't bought any mirror yet, so i'm not 100% sure the expressions are right. I can see the nose mouth thing Gigatron is talking about. It isn't working with a mouth that is 'angry' and a nose that isn't - I think I will just drop a few lens flares in his face :P

[thor64]

there! Done. Never seen him like that.