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Krazy
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:30 pm     Reply with quote
Ok so here it is the stuff that comes out of my ass... sigh and to think that thing took me 2 hours to make...guess since its my first painting period..its alrightof course i didnt feel like doin a back ground but had to show a light source and of cours the nifty lens flare came in handy....sigh (again) rip this apart i just wan to know if you notice the things i do ...please dont pay attention to the background just the mechanical arm thingy once again sigh.
I think i drew and colored better in kindegarten sigh well i guess thats what i get for not really trying to draw anything for 3 years and starting back up...sigh
overall im very disapointed in my lil i guess you can say doodle http://absolutelykrazy.homestead.com/pic.html
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SporQ
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:38 pm     Reply with quote
sigh, i'm having trouble, sigh, figuring out what it is. sigh. maybe you could, sigh, smooth out the shading, sigh, and add some more detail... ...sigh.

SporQ

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 6:03 pm     Reply with quote
I don't know what you *sigh* think gallery/finished *sigh* work means, but this isn't *sigh* done... post something you actually are proud of man.

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"Bye bye Lets get high and ride Oh, how do we do these niggas But I'm not gonna cry I'm a Bad Boy killa Jay-Z die too Looking out for Mobb Deep Nigga when I find you Weak mutha-fuckas don't deserve to breathe
How many niggas down to die for me yea yea" - Makaveli

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Krazy
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 7:35 pm     Reply with quote
hehe thanks for the replys didnt relize that i sighed so much , guess im a lil depressed....well it was supposed to be a robotic arm holding a sphere in the sand...as you can see its far from it. i would smooth it out if i knew how to i wasnt exactly going for teh bumpy dirty look and as far as i am concerned this is finished lol moving on maybe ill come back to it or redo it some other day but not anytime soon...as you can see my prespective is shot...my shading sucks and my coloring is horrid...but ill get better cuz im practicing ...oh and another reason i was sighing is because i was wondering why it took me 2 hours to come out with this. ill never know i can only get better from my mistakes thanks fur posting
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ZenDrag0n
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 8:20 pm     Reply with quote
I'm no great digital painter, hell just started, but don't use the dodge/burn tools or even airbrush so much. They look better for detail (although a few people use them and airbrush effectively) than for main parts. Use the paintbrush to build things, you won't get as much bumpiness to the image.

BTW, it looks like a messed up metal cup and ball game we all had as a kid. Well maybe just me since I was born in like 1706 or some shit.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 12:08 am     Reply with quote
hmm.. ok, seems that you are proud of it.. it seemed you hated it... just refine it more and more man.. it will improve.. don't worry.

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"Bye bye Lets get high and ride Oh, how do we do these niggas But I'm not gonna cry I'm a Bad Boy killa Jay-Z die too Looking out for Mobb Deep Nigga when I find you Weak mutha-fuckas don't deserve to breathe
How many niggas down to die for me yea yea" - Makaveli

"Got my money in my pocket, finger on the trigger and I ain't taking no shit from no niggaz" -2pac
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 4:03 am     Reply with quote
Arrrghhhhh my eyes! another tip is: dont use lensflares and stuff like that k?
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Krazy
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 11:36 am     Reply with quote
hehe thanks ya i showed my art teacher and she said it was great i was like hmmmm k and now im going to use it as an assignment so im going to repain teh back ground and add an actual light source rather than lol lens flare haha i just threw that in there to define a light source i dont use plug ins unless im making like an interface or a webpage ill post the ...um well the other picture when im done with it have fun all
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 1:06 pm     Reply with quote


quickie, 5 min... try something like this..

p.s. didn't fix the shadow

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http://www.eccentrix.com/artist/0ptical

"Bye bye Lets get high and ride Oh, how do we do these niggas But I'm not gonna cry I'm a Bad Boy killa Jay-Z die too Looking out for Mobb Deep Nigga when I find you Weak mutha-fuckas don't deserve to breathe
How many niggas down to die for me yea yea" - Makaveli

"Got my money in my pocket, finger on the trigger and I ain't taking no shit from no niggaz" -2pac
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 3:42 pm     Reply with quote
oh your poor colon
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 5:05 pm     Reply with quote
ok i did another image just now took about the same time as the other but looks smoother yay im learnin. now if only i knew how to post the pics in the damn forum...arg yes i know about the faq but nuthin seems to work blah oh well here is the new and old one http://wwww.absolutelykrazy.homestead.com/pic.html

the new one ooks cartoony...eh oh well moving on
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 5:07 pm     Reply with quote
ok well i did a new image and it does look smoother but more cartoony eh oh well here they both are http://wwww.absolutelykrazy.homestead.com/pic.html
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 5:33 pm     Reply with quote
Hehe, i think this is quiet good actualy, i hope the foregound was made too look simple on purpose?? it gives the picture a more "silly" feel to it, looks like a clip from the monty python animation
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 5:51 pm     Reply with quote
you didn't use another lens flare in the last one did you??

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http://www.eccentrix.com/artist/0ptical

"Bye bye Lets get high and ride Oh, how do we do these niggas But I'm not gonna cry I'm a Bad Boy killa Jay-Z die too Looking out for Mobb Deep Nigga when I find you Weak mutha-fuckas don't deserve to breathe
How many niggas down to die for me yea yea" - Makaveli

"Got my money in my pocket, finger on the trigger and I ain't taking no shit from no niggaz" -2pac
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Krazy
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 8:26 pm     Reply with quote
well i wasnt going for that lok but i think it turned out good and smooth,im getting the hang of the dodge tool, havent found the need for the burn and im going to try out some just airbrush and just paintbrush and see which works for me or maybe ill just be an all round type guy who knows thanks for the compliments and im not going to bother fixing up the other one mainly cuz i dont have it in layers and to lazy to do anything with it heh oh well oh and no lens flares haha ithat actually was the first time i have ever used it eh oh well prolly the last time too. hope you all have a good night or day depending on where you live. have a good one everyone.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 12:16 am     Reply with quote
Its all good man....Watch thoses shadows though. Yours seems to be going in the wrong direction. The one on the ground I mean.
Keep going.

Blitz

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