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arniemg
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:52 pm     Reply with quote
this is my third attempt at coloring.

is it easy to read?
is the light source defined?
is there depth?

any comments would be appreciated. thanks.

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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 5:55 pm     Reply with quote
cool technique.. the polygon straight edge shines are different.

outa here later

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Chapel
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 6:14 pm     Reply with quote
Well, just a tip. Coloring is only as good as the linework it is on. Without any colors it would be hard to tell what was going on in this linework. It should be able to stand on its own before it will look good colored. Sorry... I did a crit on the linework, but I think that is the first thing you should look at when you choose something to color.
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arniemg
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2001 6:22 pm     Reply with quote
yeah, i know what you're talking about, chapel. this is more of a learning exercise for me, so i hope i can get away with complicated linework.
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Infinity
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 3:21 am     Reply with quote
looks good, but a bit chaotic!

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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 11:08 pm     Reply with quote
Yah. Try to find some better line work to work with. Really like the eway you did the little green plasma blast at the bottom.
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