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Rossimo
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 10:53 pm     Reply with quote
I haven't drawn in ages, and I need to keep it up, so here's my latest. Total work maybe 2 or 3 hours. I can't seem to give my pictures that touch of realism...they always look cartoonish. Am I missing something? What does this image need? Thanks mucho.



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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 1:06 pm     Reply with quote
...or you can ignore me.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 1:11 pm     Reply with quote
I like it, but it looks really flat. Maybe more shading, or add depth to the head/mask ....?
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 1:28 pm     Reply with quote
As someone pointed out in another post, cartoons use very simple shading...a few more shades and highlights to better define depth would help make this more realistic...like the top of the helmet for example...
Good pic though . Keep up the great work

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