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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 2:38 pm     Reply with quote
Burp...



Not my usual sort of thing, but here we go.

y@

just rockin out on OLD KMFDM, today is a bumin day.
Piece out
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Periadam
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 3:20 pm     Reply with quote
It looks pretty nice. I really like the colours, but I think you should make the trees a lot more detailed. it looks like you just spent 2 seconds putting them together. I think the angel's wings could be a bit bigger and the cloth (?) around his legs should be longer. Other than that it looks very good.

keep it up

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Accept that some days you're the pigeon and some days you're the statue.

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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 6:34 pm     Reply with quote
here is another screw off for the day.

just though I'd mess with a crappy sketch.



y@
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DicklessWonder
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 6:52 pm     Reply with quote
Yep yep, nice pictures, very nice job on the Krayneum one..but I do agree with Peri on the angel..the trees could use some more shape to them, rather than straight sticks, make scragly branches..and makeing the wings longer would GREATLY increase the feeling of the picture, it would really make it seem imposing, something that could really imply death..I would definately say exagerate, make each wing AS long as the body, if not longer...still very nicely done pic =) I like the veins that you can see through the membrane of the wing very much so.
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Wyatt Turner
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 9:06 pm     Reply with quote
I'll try that concept agian. will all those improvement. I was just messing around and came up with it. I'll start a new sketch. just for you dudes.

I'll make some knarly rooty tree's too.

Veins mmm I love how that came through, also the skullish head.

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