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Periadam
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:41 pm     Reply with quote
methinks they look very nice, Axl. But there are some problems with contrast and saturation that bug me about it.

I'm not really sure what that thing on/near the forehead's supposed to be, but it looks like it might be a tattoo of some sort? Anyhow, if it_is_a tattoo, then you should lighten it up and shade it to look like its wrapping around the face. and if it isn't a tatto, then you might want to add a drop shadow or a glow around it to separate it from the face.

the hair should also be lightened up a lot to blend with the face

the eyes are a bit too saturated to blend well with the rest of the pic

also, I think the mouth looks too wide. You might want to change that too.

looks nice though

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Accept that some days you're the pigeon and some days you're the statue.

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Isric
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 11:05 pm     Reply with quote
The idea of Tin Gods has a lot of potential. I kinda like reading topic ideas and then drawing what I think I'll see. Thank you!
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 11:06 pm     Reply with quote
oh yeah, how rude of me. I really like the smooth, clean look of your coloring, good show
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 12:06 am     Reply with quote
This is something I've been working on lately.

As it is it's finished I like the mix of colour and pencil work but I'm toying with the idea of colouring the other two characters.
Tell me what you think.
Thanks.
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