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SplitSoul
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:06 pm     Reply with quote
Hmm. Trying something new.



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:26 pm     Reply with quote
Well, I think you have improved, but still IMHO you lack a good composition. It's too chaotic, the eyes go up and down, left and right and don't find any guides, any paths to look.
Hope this helps.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:40 pm     Reply with quote
I know what you mean. It was more of an experiment than anything else.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:19 pm     Reply with quote
Damn, they make birds bigger everyday, and I just washed my windshield grr...

I like the colors, but not the overall construction...It's lacking a focal point, I think.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:31 pm     Reply with quote
I agree with Rag - in an abstract picture the composition is of the utmost import. It's what seperates "good" abstract from "random."

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 3:06 am     Reply with quote
Up we go.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 3:51 am     Reply with quote
Why bump? The system is accurate enough.


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 4:08 am     Reply with quote
No, I don't like abstracts, but I do like this one - it has a surreal quality to it all - like a camara placed to the belly of a man with a transparent stomach, quite disturbing, if I might add.

good stuff.
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