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Infinity
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 3:42 am     Reply with quote
Hew inspired me to put a bit more detail into my picturem tnx Hew

here it is


critics welcome

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 5:23 am     Reply with quote
As I said, get yourself some tablet. Now your mech looks very...er.. constructed. Too many straight lines. It looks too linear As if it was zeichnet with Lineal. But I guess that's the problem with mouse drawings.

ein Tablet lohnt sich echt Bei Lidl für schon 79,- Ist zwar kein Wacom aber es funktioniert. Red Zack hat sonst noch ein Wacom für 130,-
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 11:37 am     Reply with quote
I worked after a pencil sketch, but yeah it is very linear. But it looked even more linear before.

but I really don't have enough money for a tablet... right now.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 1:26 am     Reply with quote
more critics?... anyone?

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:18 pm     Reply with quote
You improved it from last time a good deal, it used to look like lego(leg-oh). Its really good for something done with a mouse , I think. But, there is still problems with the lights, there pointing outwards > < too much, maybe make them more blurry, >0 0< try making them point forward more. Seeing as though , your using a mouse maybe you could try using free-transform(skew) on metal textures and overlaying them on all the flat planes ( if that makes sense). And I dont think the glass should be so blue. But in the end, I dont really know, I'm a newbie too.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 6:16 pm     Reply with quote
I would agree with Hew.

The windows are too blue.

Remember..."Every material has a certain level of reflectivity. It then reflects to that level its surrounding environment."

surrounding environment! you see, that means your glass will have some reflections of the land surrounding and the sky. Well all I can say is that from your pic I can tell that the surrounding environment sure as hell isnt that blue!

hope that helps..

/COLLOSIMO


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 1:09 pm     Reply with quote
hew: I made the lights looking like this >< because the perspective is supposed to be looking through the mech from a close distance... but yeah it's too far outwards.

collismo: still learning ... but yeah I gotta need to make reflections.



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