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micke
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:17 pm     Reply with quote
I really enjoyed doing this one..
I coloured it with colour-pencils and markers
and i tried to exaggerate the same way as Schiele does with his colours especially on skin, making the person look sick or unhealthy. If you look careful on the skin there are areas that are in a totally different tone or colour and that's exactly
the thing that i wanted to try.

-Mikael


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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:27 pm     Reply with quote
awesome, i really like experiments with colors, u did a good job!

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Chapel
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:30 pm     Reply with quote
Looks really cool micke. Although I think the blue on the chin and lip look out of place. Is it supposed to be hatching or facial hair?
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:34 pm     Reply with quote
That's a spiffy rock-star face. Cadaver-tastic!
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 6:59 pm     Reply with quote
Neat syling, micke. I agree with Chapel that the blue facial hair looks off, but the rest looks great.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 7:03 pm     Reply with quote
nice job as usual micke.

Im doing my self portrait also, quite a few actually, and i shade with lines like you do, but it still looks sorta flat, any suggestions?
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 7:04 pm     Reply with quote
i also agree with chapel, and what's up with his lip?
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Chapel
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 7:04 pm     Reply with quote
By the way, I know you can't really remove those marks, but if you wanted to correct it (not saying you have to or are going to) I would go back in with a grey overlapping some strokes and inbetween them. The blue stuff that is.

Also.. just wanted to say this pic reminds me of a police lineup.

[This message has been edited by Chapel (edited January 13, 2001).]
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 8:06 pm     Reply with quote
I find the blue stuff cool looking. The line art is damn nice, as usual. (Wish I could draw like that).
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 11:00 pm     Reply with quote
Love it All the features look cut and solid. The droopy eyes are a nice touch too.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 11:21 pm     Reply with quote
nice job micke i enjoy all of your work...and it is, as well as a lot of your linework, very Schiele-esque. cool shit.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 2:54 am     Reply with quote
Sick! You really achieved your aim.
You going to refine?
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 5:16 am     Reply with quote
Micke, I'm not an art critic but I absolutely LOVE it.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 9:14 am     Reply with quote
the purple ears look great

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micke
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:31 am     Reply with quote
Thanks you guys!
chapel/Justin:
Thanks, yeah the blue is a little to intense i guess, but it's no problem to fix it.
I just use Photoshop. I think i'll go for the same colour, but just hatch it in a different way. It was suppose to be facial
hair, by the way. The lip is a little too sharp, so i just smooth it down a bit. Thanks for the help.
Bubonic: I would have to see it in order to
say something about it. Why don't you just post it in a new thread? There is a ton of helpful people here that can help you out
Frost:Thanks, mate Your'e all alone when it comes to liking the blue
El Caseron: Glad to hear that.
No, i'm not gonna refine it. I think it would loose it's purpose that way.
Jess:Thanks
Shardik: maybe i'll paint mine purple
and some blue on my chin..
-Mikael




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micke
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:48 am     Reply with quote
Ok, i've done some changes..
Does it look better?
I toned down the blue a little and hatched it in a different way and smoothed out the edge on the lip.
-Mikael

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 12:01 am     Reply with quote
The fine blue fits it better! It looks more like a beard now. Was that intended?

Like it a lot. Stored

P.S.: Please look the Ole-thread...

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 5:02 am     Reply with quote
id say the blue is meant to be stuble...

great pic Micke
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Chapel
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 7:46 am     Reply with quote
Looks better micke.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 9:56 am     Reply with quote
Thanks, Glad to hear that

-Mikael

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