| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Topic : "cannibul desert fellow" |
nova
member
Member #
Joined: 23 Oct 1999
Posts: 751
Location: seattle, wa
|
 Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 3:34 am |
 |
 |
good morning..
lemme start by saying thanks to everyone for taking their time and sanity to help me out. i don't think i would have made the huge improvements i have without the help of this crew. i really appreciate it  *sniff*
ok, i posted an in-progress pic of this a while back, and now am just about done with it. a deadline for a contest is coming up, and i deviated a little from my habit of not finishing stuff, and.. finished it!
so please, before i stuck it in my portfolio for a review on monday, and before it goes into the contest, please give me some critiques and/or comments on what's wrong or what i can improve.
oh yeah, explination. art for my senior project, developing an RPG.. he's a cannibul type character who lives mostly in the desert, a consumer of magic. he's really old, but was partially freeze-framed in his childhood with chemicals and junk to make him stronger and live for a long time.
------------------
*nova
!
[This message has been edited by Nova (edited January 15, 2001).] |
|
| Back to top |
|
n8
member
Member #
Joined: 12 Jan 2000
Posts: 791
Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
|
| Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 5:27 am |
|
|
| looks cool...love the eyes.. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Tinusch
member
Member #
Joined: 25 Dec 1999
Posts: 2757
Location: Rhode Island, USA
|
| Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 8:00 am |
|
|
| Wow, that's really nice The face especially looks really good. I think the body could use a little tightening up and some detailing, but other than that it looks awesome. |
|
| Back to top |
|
EviLToYLeT
member
Member #
Joined: 09 Aug 2000
Posts: 1216
Location: CA, USA
|
| Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 9:17 am |
|
|
| I see you finally finished it . Looks great. One thing that you may fix up is the tube. I keep thinking that when the tube enters the skin, the bump should be the same size, if not bigger. (mainly the 2nd one down on the right) But ahh well... looks great nonethe less. |
|
| Back to top |
|
Sergenth
member
Member #
Joined: 06 Apr 2000
Posts: 437
Location: Milford NJ USA
|
| Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 10:37 am |
|
|
Wow Nova, you drew really nice eyes on this one. I also dig the little sneer that's creeping up onto his face.
Where do you go where you can design an RPG for a senior project? |
|
| Back to top |
|
Psionic
member
Member #
Joined: 09 Sep 2000
Posts: 414
Location: UK
|
|
| Back to top |
|
Blitz
member
Member #
Joined: 04 Oct 2000
Posts: 752
Location: Sedro-Woolley, WA
|
| Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 2:01 am |
|
|
*Humbled*
Yah, this guy is cool. Once again your work is soooooo cool and freshy fresh yada yada yaday
You know your good, I know your good, Now lets let Cogswell know your good 
Im sure they do already.
You da woman
Blitz....That guy that you still havent met yet and I missed the oportunity to do so at the art fair. Sorry |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
