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Jerry
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 4:10 pm     Reply with quote
This is the finished page of my comic book (Senses of Metals). This is also my first inked picture... crits pls...


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Delucubus
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 4:13 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, ya, i liked what you did with it from the last time i saw this page. It added a lot showing what that glider thing sees in the second and third frame.

He's shooting rockets out of his back to kill the next one right?
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Jerry
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 4:29 pm     Reply with quote
thanx... yeah he's going to kill the next one. I'm getting Erik (exellent writer) to write the script for me now BTW

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Jerry
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 11:22 pm     Reply with quote
more crits pls...

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 12:15 am     Reply with quote
Hey it looks a lot better now ....keep going and you might be a pro someday just got to keep it up you will be suprised how fast you get better....!!!!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 1:44 pm     Reply with quote
thanx... I'll try to get page 2 done as quick and best as possible

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