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Twincruiser
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 Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 6:47 am |
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This is the second sketch for that school project I'm working on. I think I nailed her pretty good 
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DarkVVulf
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| Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2003 7:58 pm |
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Looks great.
If I wanted to nick-pick I could say that maybe the strings don't actually feel connected- like they're just drawn in behind the elements they control.
For example- her head is a bit tilted down, maybe having the string attached somewhere in the hair (rather than behind it) would make it feel more connected.
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Xyster21
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| Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 2:08 am |
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It looks very good.
Great Job you did there 
Just one thing... that middle finger on her right hand looks a bit unnatural... but then again she is a pupper on strings and not *cough* real or anything so I guess it doesn't matter. :p
Have anything else to show us ? Love to see maybe Chris Katan as "Mango" (spelled right?).
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egerie
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| Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2003 7:11 am |
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| Now THIS is really cool. That belt is quite funkay *right-click, saves in 'sijun cool'* |
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