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XaV1Uzz junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Aug 2003 Posts: 17 Location: Valencia, Spain
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eyalyab member
Member # Joined: 11 Jan 2003 Posts: 308 Location: Israel
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2003 7:28 am |
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hat looks like a 5 year old painting. make it with the same tone as the rest.
the bay in the hair is tooooo big on one size. i get that he's lifting up his eyebrow, but still. at least work the same shadows as on the other side of the face because right now it looks like a big lump.
his left eyebrow isnt as detailed as the second one.
the eyelids need some lashes or a hint of lashes (i.e dark line).
the colar? if you want to leave it like that.. mmkay
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Isric member
Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2000 Posts: 1200 Location: Calgary AB
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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2003 8:21 am |
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if anything do deserve more work, it's this. _________________ matt - rhodes |
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