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jmarkey77
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:01 am     Reply with quote
Hey all,

I'm one of those people who hates to follow links on an art forum, hence I have not posted any of my work here. However getting feedback at DeviantArt is difficult at best and I am really frustrated with this work and need some fresh outside views to help me get to the next step I think.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52773960/

I am doing this work for my Son, he is five and loves Ninja Turtles and anything star wars! (like a good son should lol). I plan on doing a background of some sort, not that far a long yet. Right now the image of the turtle bothers me, every time I look at it I get annoyed but I can't put my finger on whats bothering me. What are your thoughts?
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Sumaleth
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 6:06 am     Reply with quote
My initial reaction was that he's too long and thing. The turtles are kinda think and squat.

Anatomy is off, though you'll need to use reference if you want to get that right.
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jmarkey77
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 7:03 am     Reply with quote
Wow, I think you're right. Damn all that drawing gangly aliens, threw off my game lol. I'll keep working on it.
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