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Q.design
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 11:38 pm     Reply with quote
I dont know whether I can get some feedback or help in here or not, but I do know that something wrong with my painting.
Crying or Very sad
So thank you.


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 12:13 am     Reply with quote
Thank you ! Thank you very much!
This painting isnt finish yet, I know there are something wrong,and I dont know what to do next.
I cant find where the problem is , and those bad things make me so confused!I swear to God this problem can be found in my following pic,I need everyones feedback,I realy do!Thank you so much for your kind words!!!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:27 am     Reply with quote
That horse carriage is very familiar, you are over at Cgsociety aren't you?
I wouldn't change a thing, I really like your work in here very good. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 10:30 am     Reply with quote
It's hard to give feedback without knowing what these are for?
If these are mood concepts then they are spot on! I wouldn't change a thing, but if these are concept paintings, then I would say that you could have more definition in shadows since now I can't see any detail there (or is it just my monitor?). You just have bright light and then it changes to completely black. It's almost like you have extremely intense light sources that bounces specular highlights from every object, but for some reason doesn't reflect any diffuse light.
But yeah it kind of depends what these are for..
Hope this helps

Cheers, Petri.J
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Q.design
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:35 am     Reply with quote
Quintus Dias wrote:
That horse carriage is very familiar, you are over at Cgsociety aren't you?
I wouldn't change a thing, I really like your work in here very good. Very Happy


Wow!Thank you so much!!!!You are so kind! I didnt expect you can see my post in here Very Happy .
But dring my painting process, I sitll have so many problems Sad ,some of them I can find out,something I cant.Sometimes I just know the bad things are happening on my canvas Sad So,its been a long time that I didnt paint anything new but just wanna find out where my problem is,and Im sure that I will make the same mistake again and again and again until I chang something or learn something new...

Such as the following image here,at the very beginning I still like the feeling of the value or sacle,but you know,at last one I just get more and more confuse...


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:40 am     Reply with quote
Petri.J wrote:
It's hard to give feedback without knowing what these are for?
If these are mood concepts then they are spot on! I wouldn't change a thing, but if these are concept paintings, then I would say that you could have more definition in shadows since now I can't see any detail there (or is it just my monitor?). You just have bright light and then it changes to completely black. It's almost like you have extremely intense light sources that bounces specular highlights from every object, but for some reason doesn't reflect any diffuse light.
But yeah it kind of depends what these are for..
Hope this helps

Cheers, Petri.J


Thank you so much!! I realy found out something form your words,next time I will pay attention on the shadow parts.
Its realy helped me,thank you !Thanks a lot!
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 11:04 am     Reply with quote
I really like the middle shot on that progress picture that you posted. What you can do is to divide the foreground and background more, for eg if you have a one tone background you can make some parts of it more bright and vice versa when it comes to the foreground. Foreground; Darker and then slighlty brighter.
You could make a path to get a depth without changing the elements....

I think the problem you are looking for in your finished is that you refined everything perhaps a bit too much. I believe we all have the same problem, making that balance and still have detail is very difficult.

Anyway, that 4th progress shot is amazing. You could add a little more detail to that one and make some parts more vibrant.
I tried a quick overpaint but I am afraid that I changed your concept too much.
Cast shadow on parts like the castle and such always gives you an intruiging surface to look at.....:
Here I made changes to the foreground and then the background. And less saturation. Add saturation where you want focus.



Anyway all in and all I really like your style in your work. Smile
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 5:03 pm     Reply with quote
Quintus Dias wrote:
I really like the middle shot on that progress picture that you posted. What you can do is to divide the foreground and background more, for eg if you have a one tone background you can make some parts of it more bright and vice versa when it comes to the foreground. Foreground; Darker and then slighlty brighter.
You could make a path to get a depth without changing the elements....

I think the problem you are looking for in your finished is that you refined everything perhaps a bit too much. I believe we all have the same problem, making that balance and still have detail is very difficult.

Anyway, that 4th progress shot is amazing. You could add a little more detail to that one and make some parts more vibrant.
I tried a quick overpaint but I am afraid that I changed your concept too much.
Cast shadow on parts like the castle and such always gives you an intruiging surface to look at.....:
Here I made changes to the foreground and then the background. And less saturation. Add saturation where you want focus.



Anyway all in and all I really like your style in your work. Smile


Wow! You are so kind!!! Really! This is the first time I got the feedback image,and to be honest,your overpaint is helped.Its just like a bright light to me and to my painting!!!I can learn so many things from your feedback and your overpaint!!!Thank you so much!
I will finish this painting,and repost here or the speedy part.
Thank you ! Thank you so much!
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