[el.daiblo]

I need some critism to improve pose / texture etc

[Sumaleth]

You're off to a good start there. Here are some thoughts:

First impression is that too much of the image is in the lower half of the values spectrum. Perhaps that "dark" look is intended, in which case I'll reserve judgement for the final result.

The three poses don't really work compositionally. If you're going for that Alex Ross sort of thing, I wonder if they need to be closer together, and with variation in their posture.

Or if you're going for more of a God of War action scene then you could really push the character poses you're using.
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[el.daiblo]

Yes thank u for the post ..... was tryin a way to create depth to the painting....and the poses do look too stiff....can u send me some links from where i can learn composition for better character placement and better feel of the chracters tvym ...

[samhell]

Welcome el.daiblo.

I'd say that the speedpainting thread here is definitely the best for learning purposes, or if you prefer books, I'd recommend getting this:
http://www.amazon.com/Framed-Ink-Drawing-Composition-Storytellers/dp/1933492953

[el.daiblo]

Thank you for ur feedback composition has been one of my major issues since i am self taught ....i kind of lack professional look to my paintings .....would be lovely if u could recommend more gud books .....ty in advance