[RayToh]

It's been a while since I posted here. Here's some personal work that I have been working on. Enjoy.




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[[Shizo]]

That's pretty awesome!

The perspective on the car is weirding me out though!

[Sumaleth]

Those are great. Are they 3d scenes that have been painted over?

The arm gets a bit lost in the first one.
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[RayToh]

[Shizo]> Thanks Shizo. Yeah. I guess I need to work on my perspective more.
Sumaleth> Thanks Sumaleth. I didn't use 3D for this. I guess it's the "bad" lighting that is making it feel like it's 3D. Haa. Got to train more.
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[Lakka]

The first one looks really nice. Pose looks good, just the values and hues are so close that the arm doesn't pop like something that is coming close, still looks really nice with a special mood.

On the second one, the shadows are kind of making the perspective look odd for me? The angles of light seem different at places. Also having the front tier just a little bit tilted makes it at first look like on oddity in perspective. Other than that, it looks really nice, maybe articulate the things at different depths a bit more? Same with the materials, I feel like the metal parts on the car could have more contrast, but the uniform type of style with not that much difference in how different materials looks has its own stylistic vibe though, and it does work in favor of making the cannon pop.

I feel like I'm making this up, can't really say I could make anything of this quality... it is great looking stuff after all

But I am sure you will filter the bs out

[Howie]

I already told you how much I love these two pieces, the amount of detail and strong central compositions really make them striking.

I agree with what others have said about the car looking a little out of perspective, for me I keep getting drawn to the car's tires. The back tire especially almost looks like it's floating. I think the tires might get a little unnaturally dark where they meet the road as well, I think some bounce light would help even out those values so they don't pop forward as much. But I think they are very minor issues, these pieces are really great over all.

[RayToh]

Thanks for all the comment guys. Been working on improving some additional skill so hopefully i can try big pieces again with better result. Appreciate all the comments. Feel bad after realizing i didn't reply the last time round. Still have so much too learn! Quite amazing to realize this post is almost one year ago. Haaa. Keep rocking guys.
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