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Author   Topic : "MY VERY FIRST COLLORING ... THINGY please gimme comment"
Prometheus
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 9:28 am     Reply with quote
Woohoooo my first colloring at ... anything
Please tell me what you think , btw , I only did the colloring , not the line art , it's my very first try at colloring something , I like it very much cause I tought it was gonne look 100 times worse then it is right now. Of course it's full of mistakes and you guys think it stinks and is newnie stuff etc ... but please don't kill me , just give me some critique that helps me get better tx
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napalm
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 9:30 am     Reply with quote
well.. it looks like a good start.. i think. Its hard to give a good critique because it's rather out of context, i.e. what the hell is that? a shoulder, a head, a codpiece? Maybe you could show us the full picture so that we may be able to give you some useful critique in reguards to the whole piece.

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Chapel
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 9:35 am     Reply with quote
I think you would learn more if you took some lineart that hasn't been colored. Since this is taken from a tutorial.. it would probably be best to follow the tutorial.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2000 10:14 am     Reply with quote
Well, I'd ask Liquid! for help on this, since he's pretty much the master at comic coloring with cuts, etc.
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