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anticz
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 4:07 pm     Reply with quote
Here's another little thing I did a while back. Fixed a few problems and redid the face. Thanks to everyone who commented the first time around. Still needs a background. Just trying to keep the images flowing (thanks chapel). As always, crits appreciated.



Here's a few of the in progess pics. (warning:nudity)
http://www.anticz.com/images/OtherWeirdness/GetDressed.jpg

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dr . bang
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 5:37 pm     Reply with quote
I really like this picture! She's hot!

the only thing i think that need to improve is the light shading on her boobies, (try to soften the light). Another the one is the light on her stomach, the left light is ok but the right one is too bright.

I my reply helps
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 5:46 pm     Reply with quote
Looks great!
Have you thought of using a background image with a lot of blue in it (cool colors to push the warmth of the foreground to the max)? Perhaps a balcony scene, a view at the coast by night or something...
Perhaps give some more expression to her cheekbones, to 'lengthen' the face and make it look less round. The lighting on the top of her nose is worth some experiments as well..
Goodluck
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 5:51 pm     Reply with quote
Wow looks great anticz!!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 5:57 pm     Reply with quote
Why are her breasts collectively twice the size of her head. Now, I have a large chest, but certainly not larger than my head. Other than that, not bad. Good lighting.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 5:59 pm     Reply with quote
Hrmmm.... lets see. Pretty cool. I think you need to put in a proper background. Also..one thing that keeps bothering me is the hair. The hair doesn't look heavy enough and it just seems out of place on the painting. Especially don near the shoulders......
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 5:59 pm     Reply with quote
btw, this isn't really pin-up style.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 6:04 pm     Reply with quote
At first glance I thought the image to be a girls head pasted on a fake body. Not flaming you or anything but that's what my first thought was. Looking closer it seems to blend together ok. i think that the comments on the breast being a little off as far as lighting goes were accurate. In general I think the lighting is the main issue.

You have some great talent. The image looks really nice. Just a few tweaks.


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 6:42 pm     Reply with quote
The head's a bit ugly, maybe you should redo it again, sorry...
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 6:43 pm     Reply with quote
grrr...I just wanted to press the submit button when my crate decided to crash

well don't misunderstand the tone, but I'll shorten what I said in the original message


  • it seams as if the skin has different tones (compare arms and legs)
  • lower the naivel as imo it's set way too high
  • be a nice surgeon and see what you can do about her breasts (not that I am keen on a topmodel,but...)
  • the area around the belly looks strange to me

  • shading and lighting on her legs turned out cool - like it
  • the dress is awesome - but it already was in the previous version some time ago
  • come on - I want to see another version


sorry for the telegram style :/
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 7:42 pm     Reply with quote
I feel that her left hip is much wider than would be ideal. I'd make it something closer to if you chopped off the yellow shaded area.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 10:17 pm     Reply with quote
dr . bang,
Thanks, yeah, there's alot of little light issues going on in this piece. Think I learned a little from this though.

Kristiaan,
Haven't put much thought into a background yet. I'm still pretty weak in that area. Need to concentrate on that more so I improve my skills. Definately not one of my strong points.

hydrid,
Yeah, I was trying to play with curves and anatomy here. See how big I could make the curves and how far I could go to the extmeme. Definatly not the/my ideal proportions for a woman. Ironic that I'd try painting an image of a woman that isn't really what I'd find ideal. I'm pretty sure a female could never look like this in real life. Way to extreme. Thanks for the comment .

EviLToYLeT,
Yep, first time I've tried to paint hair. Need to spend some time checking out Enayla's tutorial and play with that a little more in depth.

dementia7,
Had a lot of problems with the face. Reworked that area too many times. Got alot of help from my roommates Eric (TENMAN) and Ron (fred) but I still don't think it's quite right. Gotta lot to learn.

Solitaire,
Some great points. Thanks a million for your response. Funny thing is, the size of a woman's chest isn't something that crosses my mind when I see an attractive woman.

Thanks everyone for your resonses. I appreciate it a ton. Still have so much to learn. If anyone else has comment's, please feel free.

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