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mr.wonton
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 2:40 am     Reply with quote
Looks pretty good, but since ur obviouslygoing fora more comic style why use a photorealistic background?Just a thought....
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micke
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 11:44 am     Reply with quote
It looks very nice. I like it alot.
The subtle blue comming up her "rompe" looks good and the enviromental shading looks nice indeed. I prefer the second version instead of the first, mainly because i think that it would make more sense with a suit than without. Especially on a bike(Just imagine how cold it would get).I think the perspective looks fine. It might have some small errors, but nothing big. Are you planning to remove the lines? Maybe it would look better? Maybe it's just me.

The biggest problem i can see is the way it is cropped. I think it could be more spacing over her head and the wheels should show.
Hope this can help you a little

Thumbs up! Great job

-Mikael

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 1:05 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks again guys! What a great response.

Micke: It's funny you should mention the cropping, I've already expanded it out once. Initially, it was going to be the kind of view you get out of a car as the bike rushes past you on the highway - you know, from the lower seat of the car, and a limited field of view. Perhaps I could put the viewer's car in the reflection to show this???

Thanks again, Cheers, A.
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Hightop
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Joined: 20 Sep 2000
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Location: Mölndal, Sweden

PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 2:14 pm     Reply with quote
More nude More nude More nude...

I love nude girls and i want more of them...

Does i sound like a pervert?
no... didn't think so..

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Hightop

As i turn and look into the sun
the rays burn my eyes
happy happy happy
everybodys happy
now like a turtle the sun looks
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dbl design
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garthmidgley
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 3:15 pm     Reply with quote
Had to post a response. That's wicked Al, another one for my collection.
So how long did you spend on this one, 10, 20 mins?


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blah blah blah ...
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Solitaire
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 3:32 pm     Reply with quote
Oh it's bikerbabe season, eh - awesome pic

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Cos
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 3:42 pm     Reply with quote
i think thats really excellent work. Is it supposed to be finished? cause the rough black lines do make it look unfinished . Also the anatomy on her arm (bicep and tricep area) seems to bulge a little funnily. I look forward to seeing more stuff from you
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Loukus
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 4:13 pm     Reply with quote
Wow good thing she's wearing that... uh... helmet better safe than sorry *ahem*

I'm going to go over there now.

JL
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vengeancearts
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 4:30 pm     Reply with quote
hey,

damn cool picture u got there! very
sexy en hot, i like d nude one better
it expresses more about herself.
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Solitaire
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 5:28 pm     Reply with quote
oh, that reminds me that I've never drawn boops from that perspective - interesting; thanx for the inspiration... *grabs his sketchbok*
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eclipse
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2000 5:33 pm     Reply with quote
That is one shweet pieshe of assh!
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Shadowman
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 9:56 am     Reply with quote
Coolness man I love it!
Nothin wrong with a little nudity. The clothed one looks good too!
I think the foot looks a little strange though.
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Freddio
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 10:27 pm     Reply with quote
Isnt this pic a rip (inspired )of that french artists biker
chic?

I dunno
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Freddio
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 10:35 pm     Reply with quote
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2000 5:37 am     Reply with quote
Oh yeah, Freddy, you caught me out there... in the ten minutes between seeing the french anime-style bike chic and posting this, I just whipped up a few lines, splattered down some color (over the top of Ulrick's original, naturally), and BANG, instant rip-off pseudo-art.

Cheers, A.
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Freddio
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2000 6:07 am     Reply with quote
wow
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 30, 2000 4:11 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, I'm joking dude!

What I mean is yes, I saw Ulrick's post, and it inspired me to choose this image (out of several I was working on) as the one to post next. It took about three or four hours all up.......

Cheers, A.
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