[JIM]

ok obviously i need alot of help in lighting.
i want to finnish this one,... i truly do.
if anyone could help me that would be great.


p.s.
sorry for being an ass earlier

[EviLToYLeT]

Really can't help you with this one.. i suck at lighting and prob would confuse you. But definitely looks better than the other two posts you did back then. Really likethe expression... the mouth area and the tounge with all its good ol slippery wetness. But anyway, I think you need to go darker as it goes more into the mouth. The eyes also need lower eyelids. Hope it helps.

[El Caseron]

Two times the same thread? How's this?
Ah, nevermind. I already like it a lot. Just try and define some more details. The chest is very rough. How long did it take you? Seems to be a very quick one. If so you've go great potential.

[micke]

Hi Jim!
No worries...

I must say that i find this pic scary, hehe
The shapes are a little wobbly and some ofthe proportions are off, you could try to make the head more solid, add more contrast for a more dramatic effect.
There are also some smaller higlights that can be added in order to create more details to the face.
I did a quick paintover, hope you don't mind.
I also cropped the picture different, cause i
thought there was too much space on the sides.
[img:f661e1d818] ]http://www.katode.org/noguchi/web/gfx/dread.jpg[/img]
Hope this can help you in any way
-Mikael

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[This message has been edited by micke (edited December 31, 2000).]

[micke]

Sorry i screwed up....
Here it is:




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[JIM]

yeah i appreciate your two cents
i did need the help with lighting
i like your version, very coo
but without the ears is what i'm goin for
thanks again for the help