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Author   Topic : "[crit] Warangle final"
poxen
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Joined: 23 Apr 2000
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2000 5:27 am     Reply with quote
Hallo...
have been kinda "not here" for a time now....
my inspiration has been some where else!
but now iam back..i think

Well, well, you maby have seen this pic earlier? not finished...
Here it is, finished!

Plz, give me som crit.



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AdezJ
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2000 5:32 am     Reply with quote
Pretty cool! =)
but his neck might be a bit too long?
Keep up the good work
/Adezj
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Dives
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2000 5:50 am     Reply with quote
the sword looks 2d.
There is yellow comming trough the wings.
Also wings look sketchy especially at the bottim.
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micke
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2000 10:39 am     Reply with quote
Glad to you back, pocksen
You have improved a lot i can see.
Where is that other inspiration source at?
Maybe you could try to keep some of the shadows more sharper? It helps more often than trying to keep it smooth..

Looks cool.
Mikael


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v1510nAry
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2000 11:31 am     Reply with quote
Very sw33t picture

I like the idea of a long neck but if soo
make his body a bit longer as well

and what Dives said the sword looks 2D , mabye make the shadows a bit darker

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2000 1:25 pm     Reply with quote
That is very cool.

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