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RayTraced
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 7:48 pm     Reply with quote
Ok..I have a bunch of images...please say what you think about as much as you are willing to....here goes

Ok..this is an axe I just finished. Rendered it in Ghost. Still need to put some bump on it



Ok this is the monster sketch I did



Ok this is the current render. No textures yet



The wire



Perspective



wire



A bridge light test I did from a drawing by Vortx



Please let me know what you think and how I can improve these images. Thanks


Jesse Brophy
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LeChuck
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 8:18 pm     Reply with quote
Awsome. I hope you plan on adding textures to the bridge. It is going to look really good.
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g:tech
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 8:33 pm     Reply with quote
Hot damn, that is one SWEET ASS looking axe. I would buy that thing if it were for sale. NICE.

Can't help you out on the other things, since I'm not a 3D guru. Just had to say "wow" at the axe, though. Awesome design.

peace,
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EviLToYLeT
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 9:21 pm     Reply with quote
I'm not much into 3d myself....but trying to get there. Anyway, I think all your light sources are too extreme and your overexposing some stuff. For example, the WHOLE ax looks really shiny and mettalic....while only the blade is suppsoed to be shiny and mettalic. Although you may be aware of this, i'm just letting you know that it detracts from realism.
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Guy
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 2:13 am     Reply with quote
cool stuff. personaly i find having a really bright light helps to add a bit more realism. at least if its an outdoor shot. i really like the bridge shot, but maybe just a little bit less brightness, but not too much. this is just my observation though. best thing you can do is go outside in the middle of the afternoon and see how bright things get from the sun shining on it
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