Sijun Forums Forum Index
Log in to check your private messages
My Profile Search Who's Online Member List FAQ Register Login Sijun Forums Forum Index

Post new topic   Reply to topic
   Sijun Forums Forum Index >> Work in Progress
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author   Topic : "Take off your clothes. It's OK"
Joy/Bogus
junior member


Member #
Joined: 04 Jan 2000
Posts: 16
Location: holland

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 6:43 am     Reply with quote
Well actually it's not OK i'm doing this picture from a photograph, started sketching, did some smudging, but now i want to take it to the next level and do some major cleaning on it. I just don't seem to be able to get rid of the smudgy look any suggestions would be welcome



TIA

JoY
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Irulann
member


Member #
Joined: 20 Nov 2000
Posts: 66
Location: Dallas, TX

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 9:35 am     Reply with quote
well I think it's very beautiful the way it is...I have trouble sharpening too--maybe just use some hard brushes?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
ViperCA
junior member


Member #
Joined: 04 Jan 2001
Posts: 8
Location: Canada

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 11:22 am     Reply with quote
aakkk!!! don't sharpen it! it's gonna leave a lotta mood in the gutter if you do!

aside from that it's VERY nice it might be neet to see a little more detail by the windows
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
elam
member


Member #
Joined: 27 Sep 2000
Posts: 455
Location: Motown

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 1:08 pm     Reply with quote
boobs are WAY to big.


------------------
Elam
-------
"Not all old people are fools. You don't get to be old by bein' no fool. Buncha wise young men, they dead as a muthufucka, ain't they?"
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
Bugscratch
member


Member #
Joined: 23 Sep 2000
Posts: 313
Location: Germany

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 1:20 pm     Reply with quote
Silicone boobs maybe. I saw a pic of a porn star once that had even bigger boobs. Was kinda disgusting.

-bugscratch
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
AKIRA_x
member


Member #
Joined: 15 Jun 2000
Posts: 174
Location: NORWAY

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 1:49 pm     Reply with quote
quote:
Originally posted by elam:
boobs are WAY to big.





aaaah, put a sock in it!!!
GIMME TITS!!! GIIIIMMMEEEE!!!

AKIRA

------------------
Whos ya dady!!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Jezebel
member


Member #
Joined: 02 Nov 2000
Posts: 1940
Location: Mesquite, TX, US

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 3:04 pm     Reply with quote
Ummm... the nipple on our left looks kinda like a hole... it's sorta freaky

Hmmm... and you ripped part of my sig! grrr...

I like the unfinished look :>

-Beth

------------------
Take off your clothes. It's OK - I'm an artist.

[url=http://div.dyndns.org/FOO!]http://div.dyndns.org/FOO![/url]
http://div.dyndns.org/beth/photography
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Joy/Bogus
junior member


Member #
Joined: 04 Jan 2000
Posts: 16
Location: holland

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 4:03 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks alot for your input, i think i'm gonna work on it for a while without the cleaning and try to get some more detail on the arms and the pants.

Bugscratch: what's funny about sinaasappelsap? The glow you refer to is actually part of the original gray background that i didn't cover up yet!

Elam: they are like that on the photo too... realy!

akira_x: ah... so you could actually guess what this was then? Well thanx for repling on my other post as well (as you were the only one last time i looked!)

Jezebel: well could not think of a more suitable name for this post!? I'm open for suggestions!

See Ya

JoY


Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
faustgfx
member


Member #
Joined: 15 Mar 2000
Posts: 4833
Location: unfortunately, very near you.

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 4:33 pm     Reply with quote
big breasts are bad. :|



------------------
sky high with a heartache of stone you never see me 'cos i'm always alone/ministry
the law of lead now reigns!@#!/earth crisis

jussi.kuusi@mediaclick.fi
icq#35983387
http://faustgfx.0wns.org
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website AIM Address
IN5/NE-D/VE
Guest


Member #



PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 4:48 pm     Reply with quote
Jezebel is right about that nipple hehe, i think thye both need reworking actualy, also maybe alittle more detail and smudging in those pants and the top, ooh and the part between the breasts and just above the bellybutton (dark area) is just alittle TOO dark, tone it down or get rid of alittle of that black area to perfect it

May i ask who the girl in the picture is??
Back to top
Giant Hamster
member


Member #
Joined: 22 Oct 1999
Posts: 1782
Location: hamsteralliance.com

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 5:42 pm     Reply with quote
the shirt needs a lot of work, but its in the right direction. other than i dont know what that extra bump on the top is.

maybe you might want to save the pic again and try harsh shadowing, cause it might look interesting, cause right now its a mix of harsh and soft shadows.

oh, and about the boobs. ALL BOOBS ARE FINE. just do what you want with them, there is no wrong!

------------------
-JameZ the Giant Hamster-

The Hamster Alliance
AIM: Gianthmstr
Multimedia Producer/designer/all of the above.,overall guru :)...and music music music! weee!!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website AIM Address MSN Messenger
Bugscratch
member


Member #
Joined: 23 Sep 2000
Posts: 313
Location: Germany

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 12:34 am     Reply with quote
Did you know that we have a lot of fun here in Germany reading texts written in your language ? Sinaasappelsap. Always good for a laugh But I guess you're having the same fun reading German texts as well.

Err. Back to business I guess.

I don't think it needs any sharpening either. But you should get rid of the strange glow surrounding her body. And maybe you should give her some personality. Like this she`s a bit generic. Maybe you could just make one eye blinking out from under the hair.

-bugscratch
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
Joy/Bogus
junior member


Member #
Joined: 04 Jan 2000
Posts: 16
Location: holland

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 4:11 am     Reply with quote
Now just to get rid of the boob thing i did a quick scan of the photo, it's by the french photographer Hervé Lewis, so i don't know the girl in the picture.



Still working on my painting hope to update it here soon.

JoY
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Joy/Bogus
junior member


Member #
Joined: 04 Jan 2000
Posts: 16
Location: holland

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 8:11 am     Reply with quote
Updated the picture, still very unhappy about the arms But then this is work in progress...



Would like some feedback on this version...

thanx

JoY
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic    Sijun Forums Forum Index -> Work in Progress All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum




Powered by phpBB © 2005 phpBB Group