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Funfetus
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 1:58 pm     Reply with quote
I think I'm just about done with this, but I'd like to get a whole bunch of second-opinions about what's wrong with it, so I can fix it before I officially lock it away.

Thanks for any comments.

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v1510nAry
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 2:07 pm     Reply with quote
love the concept, and the idea (samething really)

the anatomy on the right hand seems a bit odd , mabye this was intended

and it took me quite a while to realise this man was within walls..so mabye darken the side wallz..

** WarninG **
This coming from a 14 year old but mabye helpful

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v1510nAry
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 2:08 pm     Reply with quote
gah posted twice

[This message has been edited by v1510nAry (edited January 10, 2001).]
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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 3:20 pm     Reply with quote
ahh, i like it alot, the emotion in his hands r awesome, good job
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 3:38 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, extremely cool perspective Funfetus! Glad to see you back in the swing of things with your art.. I missed your regular contributions to these forums and iCE packs. Don't leave again, I couldn't take it..

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Enayla
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 5:30 pm     Reply with quote
I get a very sad feeling from this.

Seriously... I just woke up from a nightmare, and that rather well reflects the dream.

Creepy.

And wonderfully executed

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SlightlyTwisted
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 6:20 pm     Reply with quote
It's a man (well, it looks{/i] like ot [i]might be a man) in a box. Brilliant! I love it.

I really love the... erm... stains on the floor. They really make it so much more convincing, and desperate. The twisted, tormented pose is excellent.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 6:20 pm     Reply with quote
It's a man (well, it looks{/i] like ot [i]might be a man) in a box. Brilliant! I love it.

I really love the... erm... stains on the floor. They really make it so much more convincing, and desperate. The twisted, tormented pose is excellent.
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SlightlyTwisted
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 6:24 pm     Reply with quote
Boo to the double post, and I did NOT mess those tags up. Grrr.

*shakes his fist at the forum*
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Cuddly
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 9:40 pm     Reply with quote
Awesome.

Loved it!
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Krazy
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 8:27 am     Reply with quote
i like it alot but one thing i noticed was the man was so bright and the wasll wasnt nor the floor should brighten them up a tad and make it look more distiguisable what hes in a small room thing good work better than my stuff
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faustgfx
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 8:53 am     Reply with quote
me like



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Sergenth
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 9:43 am     Reply with quote
I really like this pic. All that bugs me is that the walls have high contrast detail like the cracks with the white highlights while the contorted body has much fuzzing going on... low contrast of detail vs brightness of the white skin. It may be a Painter artifact, so I dunno :P
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El Caseron
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 11:04 am     Reply with quote
Great pose! And I like the cramped right hand! Don't care what the others say. Keep it up
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shardik
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 11:17 am     Reply with quote
i like it, the only things i would change would be that the left leg looks kinda bent and you should have pretty much the same brightness at the corner between the left wall and the floor.. otherwise the floor looks like its floating

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