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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 9:16 pm     Reply with quote


does the perspective look alright? anyways hope you all think its coming out okay, if you know of ways to make it better dont be shy to gimme some suggestions

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Blakk
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 10:53 pm     Reply with quote
Yo! I went out with my cousin on our lunch brake today and we be haven Burger King chicken sandwiches Yo!
Yo! That shit is nasty yo I just stick to KFC fo next time. Yo it's mo better yo!
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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:41 pm     Reply with quote
uh huh......
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 12:14 am     Reply with quote
*cough* there is a name for people like blakk. but anyways..

nice picture, i like the perspective a lot, you don't find many pictures like it. the jawbone looks a little off. perhaps you could angle is back a little more with the rest of perspective you have going. i could be wrong too, but take it into consideration.

i think a cool background would look nice, in the same perspective as you have him at, of course.


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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 12:21 am     Reply with quote
Yea man, the perspective on the whole face looks off to me, but its real hard for me to get it looking right :/

and yea, im goina do some kinda background on it aswell yes same perspective (or as close as i can get it )
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silber
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 8:00 am     Reply with quote
first I thought you see the pic with the eyes
of an insect but now I think one should see it with the eyes of a person who is on his knees

maybe I'm totally off but I think in both cases there have to be much more chin and neck-just an extremer downside view of the head
makes that sense?

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Ben Barker
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 11:42 am     Reply with quote
You should move the horizon way down.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 1:52 pm     Reply with quote
/me likes! But I'm not sure bout the bended legs... sorry, but it looks like the character is looking for a toilet

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 1:52 pm     Reply with quote
ah okay, that was just a last minute thing anyway, im not goina work on this crap anymore :/
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