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Author   Topic : "Chaos Girl (crits and suggestions please)"
Ysg
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 4:21 pm     Reply with quote
I plan on coloring this drawing in and perhaps adding some more characters -- I was looking for some critiques, guidence, and whatnot from you pimp daddies.


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 4:30 pm     Reply with quote
chaos? i would suggest changing the expression of the mask to something more chaotic, it looks sad. i really enjoy the overall design on this one, the only small small thing that bothers me is that little strap holding the bottom of her dress, get rid of it. nice work.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 5:24 pm     Reply with quote
As a pimp daddy I can tell you that this is some dope shit. Very wicked, no crits from me. Color it!

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Ysg
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 8:02 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks guys, I took your tips into account, Bradford. Ok, here's the girl with base colors laid down... I took out the little strap thing on her dress and also changed the eye a little on the mask, I'll make it more evil through shading. I'd appreciate any suggestions on her coloring


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 8:57 pm     Reply with quote
Looks tight ysg!!!

btw your addy is wrong on your signiture



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 22, 2001 8:59 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, I dig this drawing a lot! Great style, cool character design. Depending on what you intend to do with this, I wouldn't change much. That is, if it's a character design document sort of thing, there probably could be more information, but as a piece of art it's very cool.

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