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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 9:14 am     Reply with quote
been working on this pic all last night, but not satisfied with it. Anyone have some ideas on how i could fix this up?

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 9:25 am     Reply with quote
I can just say add more details... and fix up the lightning (I don't like it)

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 10:57 am     Reply with quote
Maybe add some more trees to that big empty spot in the middle also fix the lighting. How 'bout making the lighting running down his staff and through his body?

Ta ta for now,
-jono

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`In that direction,' the Cat said, waving its right paw round, `lives a Hatter: and in that direction,' waving the other paw, `lives a March Hare. Visit either you like: they're both mad.'

`But I don't want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.

`Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat: `we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad...'
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 7:28 am     Reply with quote
i posted a reply when the server went down... i guess it never arrived.
Well, whatever.
I see you changed the lightning. But now it doesn't look like a lightning at all.. more like some smoke... The light can be fixed too. I mean a lightning is the strongest lightsource in the whole wide universe. I think you changed the light since the last version. But it still looks like a candle is burning infront of him. A lightning would cast stronger shdows... I think

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 10:29 am     Reply with quote
Sadly enough, the only thing i like is the rocks. Hehe, great job though. You may want to change his position. It looks like he's being a lemming and running straight off the cliff.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 7:14 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for the replies. couldnt read anything till now cuase sijun has been down. I did these updates while it was down so i couldnt take any of your advise. Im happier with it, but advice is still welcome.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2001 10:16 pm     Reply with quote
Make it more dramtic! More action, more movement! More of that chocolate taste I've been looking for! Give me more! More! More!

Right now it looks pretty static, add some movement in his cloak move his position to a dramatic pose.

Take it or leave it,
-jono

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`In that direction,' the Cat said, waving its right paw round, `lives a Hatter: and in that direction,' waving the other paw, `lives a March Hare. Visit either you like: they're both mad.'

`But I don't want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.

`Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat: `we're all mad here. I'm mad. You're mad...'
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:08 pm     Reply with quote
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