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Jenn
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:38 am     Reply with quote


Well this is what I am currently working on, but the leg looks wrong and I would love some input or hints ..

Thanks



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:57 am     Reply with quote
Well the leg is not really 'wrong' it's just too blury to see how it is articulated. Try to add a shade or two.
Like this i'd say it looks like the hind leg of crouched cat but the upper part would have to cast a shadow on the paw itself...
Dunno if it helps?
Maybe the right leg should be visible too since it's not really a profile.

The idea is cool... get on with it!
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:59 am     Reply with quote
you should rotate the leg a bit inward and make the ankle thinner.
looking off of that I dig it

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 4:01 am     Reply with quote
another ::| -creature!



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 4:14 am     Reply with quote
Certainly showing signs of a very interesting critter. The colour of the tail section strikes me as a little lizardy/dino animal. This is helped along by the large hind legs and what looks to be the beginnings of some very big claws. Then you have the whole bird wings and head. A couple of things that I would think about would be the colour of the 'lower body' and how that compares with the upper body. Also watch where exactly the top of the wings connect into the torso. If too high, that would limit the movement of the neck laterally. Also, the back half of the body suggests a rather heavy creature and you'd want wings that would be able to handle this body weight.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 4:28 am     Reply with quote
Not sure if what i said was clear so here is how I see the leg. Maybe it's not at all what you had in mind but...

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 5:17 am     Reply with quote


OK this is where I am up to atm. Next I am moving the head up and restructuring it a little.. I might redraw it completely but the same idea as this one is a little too messed up to continue with. I am still strugggling with the leg sadly.

More input is welcome and I apreciate it. Even on stroke technique

Thanks to those who have replied too


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 6:24 am     Reply with quote


Well this is as far as I have gotten. It is getting there but yeh hehehe getting tired bedtime soon prolly



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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 3:18 pm     Reply with quote
i think the eye is in the wrong place. Besides that looking good.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 7:36 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks I see what you mean about the eye. I will upload what ive done in a little while.

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