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Shadow-X-
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2001 2:13 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, I just wanted to share this pic with you people for no reason, but alos wanted to get your opinion before I continue on with it. Do things seem to be alright? I just got a book for X-mas from my sister "Drawing Dynamic Comics" - Andy Smith , which isn't really my taste, but has good pictures to use as reference.

Click on pic for full size, 2nd link is to the "edited" pic where I drew what I think needed to be fixed



Edited Pic HERE!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2001 3:01 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, this is a nice peice. I would work ever so slightly on some anatomy there. the arm (his right) seems a bit awkward, even inthe edited version. the elbow should come down to the waist and the fingertips should reach about the middle - uppermiddle thigh.

other than that I like it.. I like the wings too.. good job!!

hmm looks like the knees are a bit off too. figure out a vanishing point and draw to those.. hang on ill try playing with it for you for a minute.


-Awe

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2001 3:03 pm     Reply with quote
Lots of anatomy problems there. The most obvious is that he has had his hands cut off, leaving only stumps. People often make hands too small.

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