[stneil777]

the body is a little messed up trying to get used to drawing with no refurance


color one below is the scetch



not sure what else to say. comments welcome.
OH, and i can't wait to get a mouse pen

[ April 27, 2001: Message edited by: stneil777 ]

[Brainswitch]

Not too bad, the muscles do look more realistic then some of your previous pics. Crits: He dosen't seem to have any hips at all and the upper legs are way too fat (or maybe thats the clothing).Remember to keep perspective in mind, it seems to shift all through the picture. Also, the skintones on the face seem to differ from the body. Anyway, didn't mean to rip your pic apart, just callin em like i see em.

[Sc00p-]

stneil....you dont NEED reference to make a person look realistic...you just have to study real people, real life...reference to me sounds like you're constantly picking off of a photo to get down proper anatomy and proportion, but that's not a good way to do it, becuase that way you don't learn, you don't remember unless you look at something.

Anyway, about the pic. It lacks action, the muscles are too bulbous and out of order, shape, and proportion. Also all of the gadgets around his person are much too flat...even after shading with colour, everything seems to lack definition and dimension. You can make things look three-dimensional without using so many gradations, look at micke's work, or any bit of anime to see what I mean. You should perhaps go study all of this stuff before you keep doing one drawing, and posting it, otherwise you are continually going to receive the same comments as before, because I've noticed over your last 6 drawings or so, there has been little progression.

Sorry to be harsh, but at the early stages of the game it's stuff you need to hear if you are truly posting this for the feedback. Show us that you're listening to the advice, and you might get everyone's respect back.

[Sc00p-]

whoops, sorry double post

[ April 27, 2001: Message edited by: Sc00p- ]

[stneil777]

thanx for the comments.
I'm not here to gain anyone's respect.
If you want to be nice and get along i am cool with that. If you want to be an enemy that's you choice.
I'm just acting like it all never happened.
To many people dwell on the past indeed though, o well. Some will be adults and move one, accually many have yeeaaa

Oh i'd like to add, i think when i get my mouse pen i will be able to color better.

[ April 27, 2001: Message edited by: stneil777 ]

[Dr.Squirley]

Your skill in colouring has nothing to do with your mouse...