[wildgrey]

I haven't posted anything for a while. Anyway this is just something for a school project.

I think my last post was a self portrait, too. Hm. I'm one cocky sonofabitch.
Well just tell me what you think, what's wrong with it and all. I already handed in the project, but I might do something else with this, cause I like it. Thanks!

[Gothic Gerbil]

Well, it is rather pixelly but yeah cute. Really can't say too much about it at this size, rather low contrast, the pose definitely has attitude though. All I'd have to say are that the feet are weirdish.

[Guy]

My goodness! you better eat something!! you're so skinny! :P

anyways. i think its a neat sketch and like Gerbil said. the pose has attitude. the simple shading is nice and effective.

the left foot does seem off though. maybe just shorten the front of the foot and round it of a little more. well its hard to discribe. i'd do a paint over if i could, but my server is down right now.

[wildgrey]

Hey, well thanks for the replies!
Gothic Gerbil: I upped the contrast some, got rid of the pixelly border and tried to fix the feet (feet and I have a rather shaky history together, I'm afraid). I liked this pose too
Guy: I eat more than anyone I know. Enjoying high metabolism while I've got it, hehe. Yeah, and that foot was bothering me too. Well, I did what i could...
So here's what I've got now:

I don't know about the background, just seemed like a cool idea. The ground is bothering me but I'm not sure what else to do with it. And the shadow sucks. Okay, I need to stop looking at this. So, tell me what you think! Thank you!

[Guy]

hey that foot is looking much better. i think the background and the shadow and whatnot is fine, but you could add a subtle texture to the wall and ground if you wanted to. might help keep it from looking so clean. unless you want that sort of look, but anyways it's improving