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Xpander
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 Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 2:48 am |
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This is the 3rd photoshop composition ive done. All my experience is in 3dsmax with photohop touch ups. I worked on this one for about two hours or so and hit a dead end. I wouldnt mind some feedback as to what to add or change with it. I was attempting sort of a rave flyer or poster look.   |
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Dr. Bang
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| Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 3:26 am |
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| looks alright, you're missing the trendy exploding polygon and the size 2 depressed poem. |
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dkimblad
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| Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 3:28 am |
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Even though you have used 3dsmax it's mostly 2D-like stuff. Try adding a well-rendered solid object to focus on.
Just an idea... |
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Indian_Prophet
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| Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2001 4:32 pm |
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Yea Xpander, it seems something should be in the middle (a solid object) like a warship or fighter ship (thats just me though) you coud put whatever.
I really think this would be an excelent index page for a website...so....can I have it? lol. kidding, so if you want you can put a javascript window in the middle and start adding buttons.
The design-work is well done.
Peace |
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Lihamyrsky
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| Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2001 8:10 am |
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| i have to say that's incredibly bad. |
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