[Waldo]

Greetings all.

This is a piece I've been toying with and I'm at that point where I could use some advice. Who doesn't need to seek help? I still plan on working out the shadows and highlights a bit more, but what is troubling me most is the face. Is it too cluttered? Any other insight/comments/critiques would be most appreciated as well. Apologies if it takes awhile to load and to those that may have seen it posted elsewhere, but the more input the better IMO...



Thank you!

[Vive]

Ooo very stylish!

I especially like the stars on her breasts. *chuckle*
A few comments: The wing on the far side of her helmet needs to be brought a forward a bit so that it matches up with the one on the front side. Also I'm thinking that either the feet need to be enlarged a bit, or if you're going for a more Jessica Rabbit look, make the hands smaller to match.
And I'm not quite sure, but there's something odd about her crotch. Methinks she's missing a pubic bone er something. Maybe give the lass a little shape there so she can um... enjoy herself. *chuckle*

Other than that I think it's faboo!
Keep up the great work!

- Vive

[Marakaz Buzjuz]

Cool picture, I like your style, you still have some perspective errors in it, I dont know if you mind them, but her hat is in a different perspective than the rest of her,
and you might wanna try to make her suet follow the natural form of her crotch better.

Even though I have some comments still i think it shows mutch talent