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razzak member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2002 Posts: 183 Location: -
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2002 9:12 am |
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i got a quick sketch done and i want everyone to let rip loose on him and gimme all the feedback you people can get. also i just thought it might be interesting how different people would paint him with different lighting, styles. please feel free to mutilate (not too much thou ^__^) and enjoy painting.(by the way hes called trajan)  |
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Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 3:31 pm |
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Looks good man, reminds me of Zelda from eh The Zelda series of games =D Good job.. hmm you should make a nostril on the nose though.. it seems very flat right now, good job though! |
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Vive member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2001 Posts: 55 Location: vancouver, canada
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 6:26 pm |
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I'm a big fan of head-dresses and fancy costumes, so this has hit my sweet spot. The only thing that bothers me a bit, is that he doesn't seem to be looking at anything. Move the iris and pupils a bit more forward and he won't look so "blind". Unless of course that's the look you're going for, then you can just ignore all that stuff.
Good work, keep it up.
- Vive
[ January 27, 2002: Message edited by: Vive ] |
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10ten junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2002 Posts: 46 Location: USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 6:35 pm |
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love the clothes and head peice but something with the face. I think it's the nose... It's to drawn down. |
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razzak member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2002 Posts: 183 Location: -
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2002 8:34 am |
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sorry people, i tried to actually get the view on it slightly from the top and i was aiming to get the expression and blank as possible, trying to draw him in thought, not caring about anything |
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razzak member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2002 Posts: 183 Location: -
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2002 8:39 am |
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by the way i am as far as colouring him now, but im having a rough time an choosing colours, im trying to go for the matt kijnda look, nothing too shiny, but i cant make up my mind, help would be very much appreciated |
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