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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 5:08 pm     Reply with quote
This is another original painting. Not sure if I like it or not. Seems just ok.



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Jim S
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 9:00 pm     Reply with quote
Hi!

I don't know if you want us to crit your pic or not... but here are some pointers anyways:
I have no idea what that blue thing in the corner is.
The leaves in the foreground are a bit too blurred and on most leaves you can clearly distinguish the nerves (right word?). And those leaves must be giant leaves because compared to the waterlilys, which suposedly are bigger, they are really big.
The sky is to blurry and so is the green vegetation below it.
The little girl looks like she's leaning backwards (common problem with pics similar to this).
Things I like about the pic is the water and the colors of it and The rippels around the girl's paddle. The pic also has a sweet mood to it.

I hope I haven't slaughtered you and your pic totaly now by saying this ;) Keep up the good work!

/Jim
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Samson & Friends
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 9:55 pm     Reply with quote
Aw, how cute. I really like the atmosphere but it would be better if everything was sharper and crisper. Also, what is that black think up in the top left corner? A ufo coming to abduct Tomina Thumb?
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 03, 2001 11:00 pm     Reply with quote
she's a-paddlin'...



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