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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 12:58 am     Reply with quote
well... I've been working on this for about three hours... yeah... well, I made it for my girlfriend. I removed the picture of her, for privacy reasons...and replaced it with the red outline... let me know what you think!!!



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 1:14 am     Reply with quote
It's good. It has a nice consistent feel about it. Very firery.

My only complaint would be the lettering, and how it seems to be burning away - it's almost hellish and not very romantic. But that may be a matter of personal taste.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 1:51 am     Reply with quote
ok, well burn0ut suggested I put a flower where the glowing circle is... so this is what I first came up with...


then I thought about it... and I didn't think the flower colors where right, so I altered it to this...



thanks, PLEASE let me know what you think... I'm planning on giving it to my gf tomorrow... well, today, it's 5am

[add] sorry... yeah, I *THOUGHT* I was completely finished with the picture, until burn0ut pointed out that little flower idea...

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 2:00 am     Reply with quote
ummmm... "lie" and "lay" are two totally different things.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 2:01 am     Reply with quote
yeah, but lay doesn't rhyme with die
*sigh*

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 2:02 am     Reply with quote
i can just imagine the situation where she notices the little typing error and asks you "what's this lie biz here?"



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 2:03 am     Reply with quote
wait...

lie (l)
v. intr. lay (l), lain (ln), ly·ing (lng), lies.

To be or place oneself at rest in a flat, horizontal, or recumbent position; recline: lay under a tree to sleep.
To be placed on or supported by a surface that is usually horizontal: Dirty dishes lay on the table. See Usage Note at lay1.
To be or remain in a specified condition: The dust has lain undisturbed for years. He lay sick in bed.
To exist; be inherent: The solution lies in research.
To occupy a position or place: The lake lies beyond this hill.
To extend: Our land lies between these trees and the river.
Law. To be admissible or maintainable.
Archaic. To stay for a night or short while.
n.
The manner or position in which something is situated.
A haunt or hiding place of an animal.
Sports. The position of a golf ball that has come to a stop.

[ dictionary.com is awesome ]

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 2:04 am     Reply with quote
it's a rare occassion somebody knows english grammar that precisely.

natively english speaking person or not.

just pray :)



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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 1:23 pm     Reply with quote
I had no problem with it. Then again, I'm an English speaking person. It isn't used as much in the "lay" manner, but is generally understood.

Like the flower.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 1:50 pm     Reply with quote
Can I post mine in here? It is the breaking opposite side of love... a piece that I've been working on when I get a spare moment now and then. Although... I wouldn't really consider it art or anything... most of you will probably laugh.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 3:28 pm     Reply with quote
yeah jess, please do. I'd love to see it!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 4:00 pm     Reply with quote


It's really personal.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 11:39 pm     Reply with quote
Its really good is what it is, excelent balance of text/imagery
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 4:49 am     Reply with quote
Thank you fazedesign. I'm always reluctant to post images here... Like this image. It is sort of a depiction of a relationship I'm in.. but more than that... I couldn't put it in words. But you most likely get the idea looking at the image.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 7:02 am     Reply with quote
Jess, that pitcure before i looked into it looked realy warm, but when i started looking at the imagary and the text i realised its quite the opposite.
Its quite depressing and mooding yet warm from a distance.

Very nice.
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 7:06 am     Reply with quote
"His hands clenched into fists"
"For years she was lost"
"You cant feel my pain"
"She broke"
Etc etc etc, its quite a worrying picture
I dont think i dare ask whats happaning in your relationship.
R U ok???
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