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-froggie-
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 9:22 am     Reply with quote
Hi all =)

I m new here..in fact not new but 1st time I atempt to post some pics...crit em if u want =D and be harsh! =)

So

A 3D scene (still unfinished...)



A 2D pic done while listening a song called butterfly FX



My frog, that is the logo of my sign at maxforums =)



Some art done on a bad mood



And a character research



Hope it will have lots of crits!

cya =)

PS: greetings to all the maxforums users who r here
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Jezebel
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 10:20 am     Reply with quote
I love that frog!!

I think your 3d scene is pretty nice too, I like the shiny coins :>

-Beth

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El Caseron
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 10:33 am     Reply with quote
Woah... I dig the first! How'd yoo do that book? max? Shapes?
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faustgfx
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 10:38 am     Reply with quote
the 3d scene's nice.

mistook parts of it for a hand drawn piece. ah well.



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 11:19 am     Reply with quote
Love the Butterfly pic, dont like the screeny of the 3d model tho sowwy.
I just feel useing 3dmax for art is cheating heh, too easy to get the effects and lighting.
Not saying its bad far from it... just prefere traditianal art.
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eetu
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 10:13 pm     Reply with quote
hiya.

i think your 3d scene is pretty good already, i really like the candles and the coins. and the book.

but i feel it would benefit greatly if you rethought the lighting a bit, it quite unexciting as it is.. it is very evenly lit, too much ambient, not enough contrast. some exciting shadows would make it look a lot better, you could perhaps even cast some shadows from obects that are not visible..

dunno, just something to think about. it's nice as it is, but it has potential to be more.

eetu.
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arniemg
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 11:03 pm     Reply with quote
The 1st one's sweet. I envy you.
I would like to the 2nd incorporated into flash.
The 3rd one makes me think of spumco! (yay!)

nice skills on your 4 & 5 pics.
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metalfan
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 5:08 am     Reply with quote
Hello and welcome froggie!
Here's some crits, u asked for it, right?

The 3d scene looks moody and nice.. Crits would have to be the back of the book, which I think looks strange, both the color and design.. (how would u close that book!?) I think it would look better if u made it out of some dark worn leather instead (oh, and a little thinner..)
Alright, the gold coins I get, but what are those two things to the left, they look like some leftover cookies or something

The frog logo looks very good too, but I don't like the line above his nostrils, kinda looks like it's supposed to be his mouth, although it shouldn't be there.

I think the robe your character is wearing has too many folds, but I like the lighting and the occult symbols.

I took the liberty of doing a quick paintover thingy, hope u don't mind
(Just killing some time really)



El Caseron, look here for a tutorial to make a book that looks like that in 3ds max:
http://www.3dcafe.com/asp/tutorials/max/modelbook/modelbook.asp


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-froggie-
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 7:47 am     Reply with quote
Hi =)

Thanx for the great comments all!

eetu : ok i will give a try! thanx.

arniemg : Flash thingie? hehe it s planed =).
Spumco? nice compliment =)))

metalfan: I know ! the 3D scene is not done yet (a day perhaps..). thanx for the tips =).
i like ALOT the way u have redone the overall look of the character! really great!

Btw, what kind of metal r u fan? hehe

Thanx alot again for ur comments all it s really a great place =)

feel free to continue reply and crit!

Cya!

[This message has been edited by -froggie- (edited January 09, 2001).]
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A.Buttle
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 1:52 pm     Reply with quote
Heh heh heh, you call yourself -froggie- and you're French....

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