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hydrid
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 7:13 pm     Reply with quote
So what if I can't do shading properly in color? Meet Elana, half-elf.



I know, there are infinite problems, but I thought it wasn't bad for my first humanoid that actually has smooth skin.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 7:23 pm     Reply with quote
Her left shoulder needs to be further back and probs better behind the hair, and her right eye needs straightening
Apart from that it looks good to me.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2001 8:36 pm     Reply with quote
Not bad indeed. Yes, there are lots of issues to the anatomy, but it has great mood, IMO. You didn't say if you want any crits, though...
You could check the head tutorials on anticz.com for example if you like.
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hydrid
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 12:57 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the link, that site is great!

Yeah, I should start working on anatomy, but that was more an experiment with skin tone I think.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:46 pm     Reply with quote
i think she should have a pointy ear sticking up out of her hair. That is the key feature to elfs. Other thatn that....it's purty cool
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 8:23 pm     Reply with quote
her right eye is a to far to the left, her nose is a little too long, and i think her mouth is a little small. I agree with your final statement though. The anatomy is kinda off, but you do have some smooth looking shading. I can't do that, probably a combination of laziness and lack of practice. If you weren't looking for crits im sorry :-(
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