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KroM
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 1:51 pm     Reply with quote
My very first complete digital painting. I'm so proud...
It was done in Photoshop with a mouse. (uninthusiastic) yay... Can't wait until I get enough cash for a Wacom. Anyway, here it is, in all it's glory.



Please critique and comment to your heart's desire!

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Kelsey Martin
evilkrom@hotmail.com
http://kromillustration.20m.com

[This message has been edited by KroM (edited January 10, 2001).]
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DonSeeg
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 2:29 pm     Reply with quote
Drawing with a mouse is kinda like drawing with a bar of soap. Good effort. Keep stroking.

Don
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Kjetil Nystuen
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 3:49 pm     Reply with quote
Well, i think this one deserves to go up again... I like it, nice. I've never really tried to draw with a mouse. Well, actually I tried 15 years ago or something on the Commodore 64, but I thought it sucked, and got back at using the joystick... (I hope I'll never see anything of that work ever again) I think it's very hard. My critics goes to the eye, his eyeball is one it's way out of the skull. I'd go for a more relaxed eye..

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Ulic Qel-Droma
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 4:40 pm     Reply with quote
hey i like it man, keep up the work. just one thing..he right hand looks too cartoony compared to the rest of him. put some knuckles or something (heh maybe u did that on purpose cuz i suck at drawing knuckles, i probably woulda done what u did)

-GEOFF

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ArtKeo
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 4:41 pm     Reply with quote
Looks better than most people that first started painting with a mouse.


I know it's difficult and takes alot of time, but if it's possible, try to add some more details and coloring to the background.That would make the picture more interesting.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 5:09 pm     Reply with quote
[what artkeo said]



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Shijima
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 5:47 pm     Reply with quote
YOU NEED TO SHADE THE KNUCKLES ON THE RIGHT HAND MORE....BUT GOOD JOB!
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sacrelicious
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 6:38 pm     Reply with quote
IT'S CONSIDERED IMPOLITE TO WRITE IN ALL-CAPS SHIJIMA! Oops, was I shouting?

KroM, I like your work here, especially for your first completed piece. Very well done, but I agree with the previous crits and would suggest you continue to add detail. Oh, and I too use a mouse and hate it. But soon I'll have a tablet... hopefully.

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eetu
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2001 7:24 pm     Reply with quote
I can't wait until you get a wacom either.

eetu.
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KroM
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 10:14 am     Reply with quote
It's the artist again, I had a question or two, hoping you experienced folk could help me out.

I want to sharpen this pic up and add more details, but I'm not exactly sure how I can do that. I want to fix the background too, but I'm not all that great with backgrounds. So, please give me all of your expert advice.


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