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A
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 1:44 am     Reply with quote
Hi there again,
I've been drawing - and here's the results. I really liked the linework for this (maybe I should post it too?), but somehow the end result is as off-color as I feel (I'm sick today, have been most of the week).

Cheers, A.
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SporQ
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 2:35 am     Reply with quote
man, love the lighting and the whole setting. maybe throw a bit more yellow light on the handgun/chest area.

SporQ
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 4:35 am     Reply with quote
wow i like this image =). Oh and i would add some lighting at the back of the right arm and upper shoulder. Cuz well you have 2 light sources right?
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Bare Bonez
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 6:00 am     Reply with quote
Damn..... Now that's rad..

Love the shading and the lighting! The detail is superb.. Man this is rad.. Good stuff. Post more!

-bē
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Chapel
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 6:13 am     Reply with quote
Pretty cool, but he looks crosseyed to me. HIS right eye the pupil should be closer to the nose.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 8:05 am     Reply with quote
A real nice work but you should paint over the line work so you dont get like 10 people saying ( I can still see the lines blah blah blah...anyways good work glade you decided to keep posting!
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mattready
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 8:10 am     Reply with quote
WOW!

i agree with MilkMan....soften the linework...because you have a REALLY nice painterly feel to the background, and then you have comic style linework on the figure....

i would say fade them with the eraser (if its on a separate layer) or smudge some colors on it to soften them.

SWEET!

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 8:25 am     Reply with quote
nice drawing, the lightning is excellent on the face the only crit I have, would be that the right leg looks like it havent benn worked on as much as the rest of the drawing, touch it up and it will be a nicer drawing.
Kim
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Zoso
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 6:37 pm     Reply with quote
Well good lord if that ain't just sweet as hell. Finish up that background and the right leg and DAMN!

Really like this one.
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Kjetil Nystuen
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 7:29 pm     Reply with quote
Hello A!

Nice work here. I really like the background, nice job. As some of the other guys suggested, try go for a painting. Take away the linework.

The perspective on the window is wrond, you should fix it up.

-Kjetil
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 10:38 pm     Reply with quote
Hi there guys,
thanks for the replies and encouragement!

Looks like perhaps I need to try to go for a slightly more "mature" version of this style, without (as has been suggested to me MANY times now) the obvious linework. I guess I still have the whole comics thing embedded so deeply in my brain (Moebius, Geoff Darrow, etc) that it's hard to break away from.

Maybe the time to make that break is now.

When I get a chance, I will make some modifications to this pic....

Cheers, A.
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