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MrHiemey
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 10:36 pm     Reply with quote
I made this today since I had a lot of free time. Kinda made it up as I went, but it turned out to be a hitch-hiking girl with a knife. She might make for a good story of something. Anyhow, let me know what you think, I'd like to know what to work on.



thx!!

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2001 11:12 pm     Reply with quote
Sorta neat but looks a little weak. Work on learning the bones and anatomy better mostly.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 12:07 am     Reply with quote
How does ivey feel about u drawin other girlies??

[fixed it] woop

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 12:11 am     Reply with quote
Very good, but she looks kinda lean and MEAN, maybe a nice smile... but I like it a
lot just as is, it's .

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 12:23 am     Reply with quote
if enayla and hiemey are related LIKE THAT, i'll eat my fucking head...

it'be quite odd, rather.


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:03 am     Reply with quote
don't eat your head yet, faust. I think shardik has Enayla and Ivey confused.

As far as the image, I'd have shifted the hips to the left more and the knees look a little too far down the leg to look right even with exaggerated anatomy.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:52 am     Reply with quote
though it's a nice drawing.


the knife is disturbing.



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 8:01 am     Reply with quote
yea, you're right Flinthawk, that knee is too low now that i look at it, i wasn't paying to much attention to the drawing while i was drawing, i was just drawing.
(does that make sense? oh well)
you are also right about my relationship status. I'm with Ivey not Enayla.

I'm starting an anatomy class tommorrow, so that should help with my anatomy when i am unconciously drawing. Thanks for the comments though, I'll work on something else today and tommorrow to see if it turns out better than this one.

I fixed the knee, it should look a little more natural now, although overall the image figure is exaggerated.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 1:53 pm     Reply with quote
You need to make her a little less....stiff? She seems to be leaning to the left a bit much, and it makes her look off-balnce. Good work though.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 2:04 pm     Reply with quote
EGADS!!!

I actually know someone that looks like that!!

ack! thats scary

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 3:12 pm     Reply with quote
arghh... Nice pic! i'd work on the feet a bit more and make the legs a bit shorter and it would look a lot better. but hell, i always like gal's with long legs!

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2001 3:35 pm     Reply with quote
Heh, study Rubens figures. That are very good and fat. =)
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2001 1:00 pm     Reply with quote
dude she looks like one of my x girlfriends...with the knife lol nice work i like it
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 11, 2001 7:33 pm     Reply with quote
Interesting idea.. tho a hitch hiker chick would most likely be wearing pants or shorts... and shoes.. interesting idea.. im looking to write some short stories so if you want you can get hold of me. All my details are in my profile. Also take a look at your porn mags or yur gf for figure practise. [no offense ment in this one]




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PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 4:23 pm     Reply with quote
Hmmmm....as the head part of the image trickled down my modem I thought 'mmm...looks like Alice'. & then I saw the knife. Mmmm...it is Alice. (As in American McGees Alice in Wonderland, for the hard of thinking).

Ahhh well - it looks good anyways. The sole thing I'd pick up on is the strong black line under the chin.

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